Review Detail of maxgonz in Legend of Argo: The thrill seeker

Ok so read to chapter 20. From what I've read this is honestly a decent read so far. The only criticism/hopes for future changes, I'd give is for one don't make MC a slave to the system as that is really annoying (that being said that hasn't happened yet but I just hope you don't do that in the future), secondly please don't make MC a simp as he has been, like for example where he called out his friend for hitting the woman or gifting a gun to a random chick who he thinks is hot like wtf.. and that's about it. If you can try to be consistent and keep on writing and I'm sure your fanbase will grow! Good work.