Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Legend of Argo: The thrill seeker

Hello! I really love the novel! especially it was a system! But I would like to point out some improvements! I noticed that at the first parts, there was a first person point of view but on the last parts, it changed to third person point of view. I suggest to stick to one or someday, someone will point it out on you. So I liked the story! and I hope it will improve in the future! You have talent and you have a story to tell so good luck!