Review Detail of DaoistpDMGcJ in The Epic of Leviathan

I liked the part with MXA, there was no big harem and the author talked about the actions of the protagonist, there was some kind of constant activity ... I didn’t really like the world of Gary Potter, because they talked too much about others and talked too much about his relationship with girls, the world of Gary Poter could have been made better, it was necessary that he often figured and created events, but he just sat and waited ... the chapters go on without movement at all, talking about how the girls feel, about what they do, about their sex with Reo, about their some kind of joint vacation, on which they drank, They fucked and everything was done again, the harem is needed less, 4 times, less feelings and their relationships, the actions of the protagonist and his interaction with the world are needed