The storyline is good actually. The characters involvement, past life, power, and abilities are pretty neat. Hoping to see more in the future. I'll be watching your journey 👌

It's pretty good... my friend and I have made plans to make one too. Although the process of learning how to actually make one is hard, for you to be able to pull it off as someone who was recommended by @Lorenzogonzales. I'd expect nothing less. in short I love it

This is how the three boys look like, this is one of my most recent drawings of them since the book cover is kinda old. Red, Humility and Harry respectively. ;)

Hi! First time writer here...or at least the first time I actually try to complete one. But don't worry! I wouldn't suddenly drop this mid way! heheheh. Anyways these are the pros and cons of my story. Hope you check it out first. Cons first. CONS: 1. The older episodes or chapters if you call it that, are short. But the new ones, as you keep reading will be more than 1500 words. Be patient. 2. As I've mentioned above, I haven't actually made books before so expect it to be at that level. Sorry. 3. Not written the way usual novels are. (Both good and bad I guess.) 4. My first language isn't english. 5. The story is fast paced for some. PROS: 1. If you want something about supernaturals but with romance, this is for you! Bonus if you love Japan too! 2. My english isn't bad, well, according to me anyways. So you'd understand it still. 3. My format in writing is much convenient to understand, or that's what my friends say anyways when I showed them. 4. I'm a fast writer so expect this to have lots of updates every week. 5. If you love tons of backstories and characters to relate to and love, maybe you'll like this. 6. Japanese yokais here we go! 7. All characters have flaws and good points, so they won't feel bland. According to me, though. 8. Needs parental guidance, but nothing sexual here. So minors can read. 9. Even if it's starting out, a lot of episodes are already available so you can enjoy!!! Thank you for reading. I appreciate it so much and forgive me if ever I have some flaws as a writer too, it can't be helped. Arigato!

The plot and character development are commendable! I've never read a story as exciting as this one,I look forward to more stories from you ☺️

Very impressive story for a beginner writer 👏👏👏👍👍👍 lots of potential and can't wait to read more of her novels... Very proud of you and will always support you... Congratulations....

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I love the story hope to see more of a story like this, and to inspire more writer to write and share more story....

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hello tigerpaws💖 your story is beautiful, I enjoy reading it, I hope you can make many more stories I will always support you🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💖💖💖💖💖💖