The picture for the cover page is great! A very good material for an original and catchy cover page ;) The plot of your story is captivating and the characters expressive. Nicely written descriptions. You don't really struggle with tenses, style, or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well!
Minxs
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