Liking how the story is going so far, some things that I noticed that you got wrong are the levels for equipment. The levels for equipment in RSSG go up by 5 levels each time, for example at level 0 you can equip level 0 equipment. The only time you can change equipment is when you increase your level by 5 or have an item that reduces the level requirement for the item making you able to equip it at a lower level. I don’t know if you did that on purpose or not but just pointing it out, overall amazing fanfic so far. Writing quality: 5 star Good grammar and good quality writing so far Stability of updates: 4 stars Don’t really know when the story will update but seems like it’s has good update rate so far Story development: 4 stars Some things are different from the original which is nice Character design: 4 stars Like where the characters are going can’t really say much about this department right now World background: 4 stars Already know a bit about the world but don’t know if there’s gonna be anything different, or if the world is exactly the same since it hasn’t really been explained In total: 4.2 stars Just my opinion on the story
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LIKETf does waifus have to do with power? lmao. I can promise you that the game itself is the path towards power in both real life and virtual. Virtual reality is basically a job in real life. Games count as real life as well in RSSG's universe. HOW is this pointless? Waifus are just useless to SF currently, and in the close future as well. He doesn't even have time for stuff like that... He went away from his guild for a week, and it was almost destroyed... HE needs to build up a proper and solid foundation for his guild... which is to become a super guild, or at best, Great Super Guild. Connections, etc and all that sht is important as well. In short, SF Isn't interested. After he has reached all of his goals? sure, why not. "pointless" what joke is this?