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IAmDragon
IAmDragonLv144yr
2021-01-12 09:39

Liking how the story is going so far, some things that I noticed that you got wrong are the levels for equipment. The levels for equipment in RSSG go up by 5 levels each time, for example at level 0 you can equip level 0 equipment. The only time you can change equipment is when you increase your level by 5 or have an item that reduces the level requirement for the item making you able to equip it at a lower level. I don’t know if you did that on purpose or not but just pointing it out, overall amazing fanfic so far. Writing quality: 5 star Good grammar and good quality writing so far Stability of updates: 4 stars Don’t really know when the story will update but seems like it’s has good update rate so far Story development: 4 stars Some things are different from the original which is nice Character design: 4 stars Like where the characters are going can’t really say much about this department right now World background: 4 stars Already know a bit about the world but don’t know if there’s gonna be anything different, or if the world is exactly the same since it hasn’t really been explained In total: 4.2 stars Just my opinion on the story

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RedTauros
RedTaurosAuthor

Thank you for your support! I never knew about that. The only info sources I have are the wiki and the story itself, so I'm just trying to keep it logical that way. I'll definitely take that into account; thank you

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

Is there romance and possible snu snu ?. I stopped reading the original novel for that, there was nothing that the mc enjoyed his life, it was stubborn work

IAmDragon
IAmDragonLv14

So far I don’t know since there has only been a few chapters released.

Hollysummoapocaly:Is there romance and possible snu snu ?. I stopped reading the original novel for that, there was nothing that the mc enjoyed his life, it was stubborn work
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

He enjoys the game, duh.

Hollysummoapocaly:Is there romance and possible snu snu ?. I stopped reading the original novel for that, there was nothing that the mc enjoyed his life, it was stubborn work
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14

The most stupid thing about the original book was he played a game with a single-minded focus. Dude you reincarnated, spending your second life playing the same game is kinda pointless . He needs to gather power in real life too. Waifus, power, money etc.

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5

jaja

JustABoxWithAmmo:He enjoys the game, duh.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

Tf does waifus have to do with power? lmao. I can promise you that the game itself is the path towards power in both real life and virtual. Virtual reality is basically a job in real life. Games count as real life as well in RSSG's universe. HOW is this pointless? Waifus are just useless to SF currently, and in the close future as well. He doesn't even have time for stuff like that... He went away from his guild for a week, and it was almost destroyed... HE needs to build up a proper and solid foundation for his guild... which is to become a super guild, or at best, Great Super Guild. Connections, etc and all that sht is important as well. In short, SF Isn't interested. After he has reached all of his goals? sure, why not. "pointless" what joke is this?

Transhumanist:The most stupid thing about the original book was he played a game with a single-minded focus. Dude you reincarnated, spending your second life playing the same game is kinda pointless . He needs to gather power in real life too. Waifus, power, money etc.
Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend/wife?

RedTauros:Thank you for your support! I never knew about that. The only info sources I have are the wiki and the story itself, so I'm just trying to keep it logical that way. I'll definitely take that into account; thank you
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