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The most notable thing about this story is the characters. Few webnovels can make a character feel like a real person we can relate with and this story provides us with that. I do have some complaints about how certain things which have lots of potential are just glossed over . But overall it's a pretty good story
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I do know what some are those things are! I felt that as I reread it to get a different understanding of how it could be improved. As it is being rewritten those things I thought were kinda glossed over, certain issues that bring the true realism value to my book alive. I would love to hear what you think as well on those complaints. For now I'm considering this a rough draft lol!