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im split on this novel. the idea is good, the grammar is good, it is original well as original as system novel get but the execution not so much. the amount of chapters i skipped was a lot, 20-30 and the issue is that i could just seamlessly jump back in and i missed nothing. that is a major issue. it means the pacing of your story is crap and/or you are too descriptive on useless content. i wouldnt know i havent read it. this story feels like you read to the first taunt quest(ch15ish which can count as the prologue) and then jump to chapter 45 for the story to start. you need to make sure not to waste too many chapters on one event, you wasted way too many chapters on that especially when the main character isnt even doing anything, the mc itself is fine.

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