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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-12-21 04:31

I read it in ff.net, and whilst the updates arent exactly fast the chps are super long and well written. its all dope. The ' thing ' of this bk is basically a harry potter timetravel , second chance from second yr or so. The characters are OC but have their OG quirks. hermiones intelligence, nevils friendliness and shyness., shit like that. And the OC isnt too far nor is it unlikable. its nice. Harry is more OC though, but isnt bad.. more confident and stronger [ well getting more stronger ]. There is character bash, of characters like snape, dumble, ron , etc but its all build and inst random or some senseless shit. The bk focuses on the characters interactions, and that is build well. though still to soon, atleast till where I read, the author did had new shit here and there [ heir potter, inheritance of founders ], so pretty sure more will be there in later chps. overall , its a good read --- just suggest author dosnt bash the magic society too much cause , whilst they were bigots, they were not retards. they had power, so maybe not bash their abilities? and character bash, not too unreasonable. other than that GL. - OH AND NO HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!....yay!

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Quatroquatro
QuatroquatroAuthor

I love that you approve the little individual quirks that I added to the characters. One of the things I worked hard to think about is how would I give unique traits to the characters!

Zerak
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I always look for you reviews on new novels. most of the time we tend to similar opinions on novels.

YameteAuthorSan
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Were same brother because im already fed up in trash and ero novel..

Zerak:I always look for you reviews on new novels. most of the time we tend to similar opinions on novels.
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