All is just average for me. especially, I hate the MC's attitude. by being such an ungrateful bastard, unreasonable bitch, toxic and undeniably stupid. That's so cringe for me. I don't feel as enjoyable as other naruto's reincarnation fanfic. Anyway. Goodluck for other reader and author.
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LIKEHavocHUN:Certainly interesting, I have no idea what would make you say he is an 'unreasonable bitch, toxic and stupid', but I know everyone has their own impressions of my work. Thank you for the review.
This only happens a few times in the start, because he has a hard time 'acclimating' to the new world for various reasons. After he is able to at least move or do anything else besides just thinking, he stops ranting and focuses on his goal.
Idealist:anyway, that's my impression. As long as the MC doesn't do any rants in his mind (coz he was toxic, childish 30y.o, suicidal old man reincarnate). I would read it delightfully.