Well I can say that the English is of decent quality It's just.. we got no description of the main character.. The stability I wouldn't know much but seems alright. Now for story development? I can say that this part is a dumpster fire.. It is being infested with votes for other stories and not part of the main work.. I didn't come to vote like a democracy I came to read. World background well.. it's Deadman Wonderland. A great idea.
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