Review Detail of RazorIsSharp in The Forgotten Lands

I like Kai so far! I can't wait for him to become even more sinister, and menacing. I feel like I'd like to know more about the environment and world that they are in, even though some details are mentioned, just so I can 'see' everything happening, but definitely like it! Hope you make the release schedule consistent and try to get to 15,000 words! If you do before a month is up, you'll make it on the New Rankings list, and that will help your book get seen! Keep writing!