Review Detail of Thedumbdaoist in Infinite Legacy

Hello! Shameless self reviewer here! This is my first novel and I appreciate all of your viewer's support! I'm really glad that there are people out there that are taking time out of their days to read my novel. I try my best to make it as good as possible, but it may seem boring at times and there may be plotholes. Don't be afraid to criticize me, feel free to tell me what sucks about the novel. I've read a lot of cultivation novels, and I would always point out the problems in them and say 'I could do it better!' so I decided, why not? It's pretty hard to write novels. Even though I can point out stuff that irks me about other's novels, I find myself incorporating the same cliches into my novels. I kinda get why all cultivation novels seem similar. I'll still try to keep it as original as possible, though. Let's hope the procrastination monster doesn't get me.