Review Detail of CodeW in Supernatural

As of 3 chapters, there isn’t much that I can say about the overall quality yet. The plotline, as of Ch.3 seems interesting, yet also a bit cliched. (The wonder of tropes) The female MC is already introduced to vampires in the beginning, which is nice. Grammar-wise, this book is filled with a lot of grammar issues. I hope that the writer can tidy them out at one point. Sincerely, CodeW