Review Detail of Bee227_ in Supernatural

While the story was understandable, there were also many simple grammar mistakes that if fixed would greatly improve this story. There are only three chapters at the time of my writing this, so it is hard to accurately judge the story development, character design, and world background. From what I have read I feel like overall this story could use more description. There are not many details about the main character nor the world she is in, which prevents an immersive experience. However, I think the author has an interesting idea and I am wishing them the best as they continue to expand on it!!