Review Detail of caia_clearwood in Intimacy

When i read the synopsis, I felt a little confusing. Who are all those people? A more clarified way would have been better. There were grammatical errors and typos. Other than that, its a good compelling atory. I felt bad when she got betrayed by her best friend when he admitted he asked Christopher to ask her out. I would have accepted nothing less than a good grovelling. I wonder how it turns out in the end?