The problem with having an overpowered mc is that it kinda trivializes any conflict, making the story lack tension. Overlord battles this by having Ainz be a cowardly, cautious person stuck in a position where he thinks he needs to be perfect while being influenced by his new undead nature. This, plus the fact that Overlord is told mainly from Ainz's opponents's perspective, keeps the reader invested. The story plays out more like a horror story told from the perspective of the world's inhabitants, while occasionally coming back to the invader who accidentally inspires his pet monsters to conquer the world. In comparison, having Rei as the main character feels really lacking. He's got a plan for everything right from the start, so there is no tension. Most, if not all, of my enjoyment reading your story were his interactions with others. I really liked his dynamic with Momonga/Ainz and the way Solution acts around him. In fact, i think this would be a great story if Rei let Ainz do whatever and just behaved like the troll he is. More interaction, more conversations between him and the Overlord cast would be really interesting. And finally a question: Why does Rei keep his plans and history secret from Ainz? Aren't they friends? What purpose does this serve?
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