Review Detail of JershonTheWriter in World First Ant King

Item: World First Ant King
Rating: 5

Review detail

JershonTheWriterAuthor3yrJershonTheWriter

writing 5stars because am thw author of the book (｡◕‿‿◕｡) ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿Hands Up Give Me 5star reviews. just kidding you guys can review my novel based on your perspective😊 and you can say bad or good things i don't care ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ as long you put out what am i bad at so i can imrpove and what i am good at so i can cheer up (•◡•)

World First Ant King

JershonTheWriter

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Roon_Toon1Lv14Roon_Toon1

pls no harem

3yr

Roon_Toon1Lv14Roon_Toon1

also, you need to get better at capitalization

3yr

JershonTheWriterAuthorJershonTheWriter

literally no harem because his an ant he doesn't have a pe**s

Roon_Toon1:pls no harem

3yr

JershonTheWriterAuthorJershonTheWriter

yeah ok thanks ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ for the feedback i will try to improve (ᵔᴥᵔ)

Roon_Toon1:also, you need to get better at capitalization

3yr

Roon_Toon1Lv14Roon_Toon1

try using Grammarly it is a free application that helps with grammar

JershonTheWriter:yeah ok thanks ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ for the feedback i will try to improve (ᵔᴥᵔ)

3yr

JershonTheWriterAuthorJershonTheWriter

yeah wish i could but i totally don't have enough space(MB) On my Phone (ᵔᴥᵔ)but thanks anyway for the recommendation

Roon_Toon1:try using Grammarly it is a free application that helps with grammar

3yr

PuddingMasterLv14PuddingMaster

I need more

3yr

PuddingMasterLv14PuddingMaster

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