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JershonTheWriter
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2020-12-21 03:28

writing 5stars because am thw author of the book (。◕‿‿◕。) ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿Hands Up Give Me 5star reviews. just kidding you guys can review my novel based on your perspective😊 and you can say bad or good things i don't care ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ as long you put out what am i bad at so i can imrpove and what i am good at so i can cheer up (•◡•)

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Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

pls no harem

Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

also, you need to get better at capitalization

JershonTheWriter
JershonTheWriterAuthor

literally no harem because his an ant he doesn't have a pe**s

Roon_Toon1:pls no harem
JershonTheWriter
JershonTheWriterAuthor

yeah ok thanks ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ for the feedback i will try to improve (ᵔᴥᵔ)

Roon_Toon1:also, you need to get better at capitalization
Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

try using Grammarly it is a free application that helps with grammar

JershonTheWriter:yeah ok thanks ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ for the feedback i will try to improve (ᵔᴥᵔ)
JershonTheWriter
JershonTheWriterAuthor

yeah wish i could but i totally don't have enough space(MB) On my Phone (ᵔᴥᵔ)but thanks anyway for the recommendation

Roon_Toon1:try using Grammarly it is a free application that helps with grammar
PuddingMaster
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I need more

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