There are a few issues here and there grammatically that the author can look over once the novel has been completed - while present, such as the mix in the character name from Belle to Bella from chapter to the next. The story is paced well and the development of the characters is fleshed out and even - their growth is organic in its nature. The writer has a good grasp of the English language and I would not be surprised if they were eventually contracted. This work is promising.
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