Review Detail of IkuSaari in The Replay

Ok. I actually like the time skip consistency and the fact that the author is willing to elaborate on where and when it is right now in the text. The story in itself is mysterious and luckily does not feel infodumpy at all. And again, thanks for making it clear that we skip to a family dinner a while ago etc. it improves the reading experience greatly. However, please, try to write without including song lyrics. As for the general feeling of the language and the characters, it is clear that the author has written before. There aren't too many errors, the flow is enjoyable, and the characters are lifelike and perhaps it is better that they are not caricatures? I think most readers will like reading this if they have come this far.