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Nilo_A
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2021-08-24 03:39

Hello, Author here! I believe it is time for me to drop a review on this book. Of course, I'll be shameless while I go about it. Firstly, the writing quality. What I can say concerning this is that for my first book, the writing started out decently, and only got better as time went on. If you can survive Volume 1, then you will truly see the true potential of this book unfold! Secondly, the stability of updates. Well, as you most likely have noticed, I update twice daily. I don't plan to change the schedule, so yeah, expect 14 chapters a week. As for the story development, I believe the story develops nicely. Aside from some newbie mistakes, you can expect to be captivated by the twists and turns this book will take you on! I believe, and can assure you that my characters are wonderfully designed. Nothing else I can say on that. As for the world background, the world setting of the book is very vast and dynamic, giving the characters a lot of space and leeway to express their powers. With that said, I hope you can give my book a chance to win your heart. Have a great read!

The Sorcerer Supreme: Reborn!

Nilo_A
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208 Chs

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sagewukong91
sagewukong91Lv2

Does it contain romance?

3yr
Nilo_A
Nilo_AAuthor

Just a very negligent mention since Kasuyi was married before he died. You won't see any mention of it after the recap of Kasuyi's past.

sagewukong91:Does it contain romance?
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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1

why does nobody rate your novel?

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DgodRequiem
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Writing Quality - Nothing wrong with this one everything seems to flow with no grammar mistakes spotted from me. Stability of Updates- On point, yessir. Story Development- A tad to fast, ur story is becoming to fast paced so i recommend u slow it down and try to slowly introduce things so u wont later regret the decision of going to fast. Character Design- The characters at first seemed like they would have a lot of personality but to me the characters are transitioning into 1 d characters bcuz of the fast pace. World Background- We understand most of the world background at this moment in time but we aint 100 % certain all the blanks have been filled. Overall 7/10 Recommendation- Fast pace> Slow it down Not trying to sound like a dick but i like to say it how it is,

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This book! I have no words, literally! Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp xp xp xp xp xp xp x x x x x x x x x x x x px px px px px px px px px px px pxe pxe pxe pxe pxE

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Hey, just wanted to let you know that the cover art is the art for a magic the gathering card and as such isn't owned by a specific artist and you don't really need to worry about that.

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This book is very fun to read. The writing quality is fine in my opinion and its easy to follow the story.

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Ice_Princesss
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I really love Kai's character. Every chapter was interesting and although I could read all the chapters, the ones that I did read were very enjoyable. Keep up the great work.

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pandu_apple
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Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story itself was pretty interesting, nice long chapters, good quality, and the grammar is not bad, I am quite curious to see how this story goes. Cant wait for more.Please update more author

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Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

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Great book! I like the characters and the world background, although it isn't until a while into the book that some stuff gets explained. Overall, it's a great read! Keep up the good work, author!

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