27 chapters in and there's been no world building and the mythology isn't established. What's the difference between lycans, werewolves, and hounds? How large are the kingdoms? What level of technology is in the world? What kind of magic exists? How long do characters live? What do they look like? What's the climate like? The characters aren't established. We're told their names and almost nothing else. How old are they? How are they related? How do they feel about each other? What are their motivations? WHAT ARE THE CHARACTER'S MOTIVATIONS? But hey, there's suddenly a romance between two people we know absolutely nothing about. I can't. There's also spelling errors throughout. Characters are described as "clam" and "storage".
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