Grammar: Below average but barely understandable. Constantly swtiching between 1st and 3rd povs without warning inside one sentence. MC: Dumb. Really lacks common sense and his plot armor is a bit too strong. He really is dumb btw, not just saying it to express that I hate him. He is objectively as a matter of fact dumbass.
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