Review Detail of Xyenox_chip in THE YULETIDE BET

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Rating: 4.2

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Xyenox_chipLv13yrXyenox_chip

The first thing I like about this is the fact that it is a fresh, new concept which is refreshing since a lot of things in web novels are recycled things but the author still needs a bit of time to flesh everything out. Good luck!

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snarkydove

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snarkydoveAuthorsnarkydove

Hi, thanks for the review. Please may I understand what you mean by flesh it out so I will improve on that. Thanks

3yr

Xyenox_chipLv1Xyenox_chip

As in completely show as everything by world development and character development

3yr