Not bad so far. It shares the same qualities as any normal Video Game book but the author has a nice way of using their words to make it more enticing. Synopsis: Neatly done and well organized. Clearly tells you what the story is about and the grammar is on point. Story Development: At parts, I found myself zoning out but as soon as I started drifting, there's something else to pull back on my attention. The book definitely has potential. Character Design: Not much said but that's okay. Some readers rather to imagine how their characters look rather than have it described for them. It's a matter of preference. Writing Quality: Far from bad. Pretty decent grammar but there were a few sentences and phrases that seemed a little off. It was hard for me to understand what the author was trying to say but those instances are few. Still a great job. Overall, not bad author. Keep up the good work! I wish you the best!
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