The premise is intresting, that is to say zo have an MC who is not a goody two shoes. However it is written like a bad wuixia fic. The grammar and sythax is all over the place that make the story difficult to understand. Furthermore the story itself makes little sense, like a 9 year old beginning to build an army or deciding a person born a week ago is useless. In conclusion I would say this story is for those that expltored all other options of better quality and have time to burn with nothing better to do
GNaNA
Liked by 4 people
LIKENo replies. Be the first!