Review Detail of reibei in White Blaze

I apologise for the grammer and will surely work on it soon by editing the first chapters. THANK YOU very much for reading and give your review....

i really don't understand people like you. if the grammar makes the book unreadable, don't rwad it. if its BORDERLINE unreadable, BORDERLINE dont read it. the author already said they're working on it. almost no one on this app for making books is a native english speaker. if you don't like it, become an editor.

Hes not reading it obviously. Did you not read his review? He stated he couldnt make it past the second chapter. Why do you have such low standards anyways ?

Never mind just skimmed the first Chapter and the grammar doesn't seem to be that bad. I thought he mean machine translation kinda bad. I'm gonna start binging the book since I like the premise, and the synopsis kinda hooked me.

I edited it, buddy.....Thanks for reading, I hope you will find it to your taste...

The grammar gets better as the chapters pass by and the story is very enjoyable, the story explores a popular genre but different from most other books. Instead of finding some "ancient" or "secret" cultivation path, Zeph actually has to carve his own story in millions of others.

Isn't eaiser to write to your own langage then use an Translator app?

Translator not so accurate....