Review Detail of Clone_v2 in My Time System

From what I read, I can say that the story seems interesting. However, for a native English speaker such as myself, the good story seems to be buried beneath a layer of writing that just makes it difficult for me to really understand everything that's happening without rereading a sentence several times. Now, I'm not going to say everything I could about the prose, the structure, the grammar and what have you, because the author freely admits that these chapters can be considered as raws and that editing will take place to correct the biggest issues. All I can say is that the author and I have a different philosophy, when it comes to releasing chapters, While I would prefer they meet a certain standard, granted not the highest standard, but a standard I can be comfortable with before I publish, the author has chosen to focus on quantity of release, and to correct her work as she goes. I can't fault her for that, but it does make it rather difficult for me to get into the great story underneath. If you're looking for a great story, with funny characters, and unconventional writing doesn't faze you, this webnovel is for you. If, like me, you find it a little bit too distracting to have to reconstruct paragraphs in your head, I'd suggest waiting for the editing chapters to enjoy this diamond in the rough.