I guess this is my second review on this platform. I like your story, the characters felt real. I'm not an emotional person but you executed it well in Elos vs Ramius scene (I cried (╥﹏╥)), and also the others fight as well. The tension of the fighting and the thriller whenever there is a trap, it feels like I can erect anytime! Well done! Your story now is one of my favorites, keep up the good work, Author!
VAJ
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