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Review Detail of Necroghan in Song of the Nameless

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Necroghan
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Overall, not bad. The story progresses at a smooth pace and is pretty engaging. My one work on point would be; don't be afraid to make shorter paragraphs. I feel like you could really benefit from adding a bit of space between some sentences. A lot of people on the site are mobile users and that sort of thing makes it easier to read. Good job so far!

Song of the Nameless

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Thank you for the feedback! :)