Review Detail of the_tea_pan in Ambience of Ambiguity

Item: Ambience of Ambiguity
Rating: 5

Review detail

the_tea_panLv143yrthe_tea_pan

If You can work on your synopsis i think it would help to lessen the confusion some people are having. Also try to seperate your longer ‘block’ paragraphs into smaller ones. Its easier on the eyes. The flow is good and the characters are funny! This story is Has potential dont give up!

Ambience of Ambiguity

Daoist_Showers

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Beracah_LaurelLv1Beracah_Laurel

You don't say. Makes me strain my eyes to find where I have reached in case I get lost

3yr

the_tea_panLv14the_tea_pan

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Beracah_Laurel:You don't say. Makes me strain my eyes to find where I have reached in case I get lost

3yr