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Review Detail of Daiost_Showers in Ambience of Ambiguity

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Daiost_Showers
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It's a beautiful start. but where is the main action of the story. You should begin with the action if you want to have your readers hooked. Nice going by the way. hope you listen to my advice. or better still restart the book with the action.

Ambience of Ambiguity

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Beracah_Laurel
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I agree with her