This is a good one, the concept of 'Group Chat' seems to be getting famous, we can congratulate Akikan for that I guess, even tho there is a Chinese novel of a group chat, that's like sht compared to Akikan's fanfic. Writing Quality: Bad, bro you need an editor, how the hell do you forget your own characters' names? Is it Catherine or Christine, decide. Stability of Updates: Amazing, do you even sleep fam? Character Design: Some of them are not really that loyal to their originals like CYC but despite that, I like this CYC more than the original one. World Background: Not really that much taken into consideration. First: I don't like that MC became handsome... Let me explain, I didn't like that he was being called ugly all the time either but I believe you could've just stopped doing that and leaving him a little ordinary. Of course, he has to be strong but that doesn't really mean he has to be handsome. You did really well in the strength increase, I like that he trained, I like that he began weakly, I like that he lost that battle against those demons and stopped relying on Yuechan, all that you did perfectly. But you had to mess it up by making it handsome, losing a big chance for comedy. Imagine the Young Masters faces when the strong chubby guy has the devoted beauties. What a great face slapping material and you let it go just for self comfort, or to appease the audience. I don't know who the harem members will be, I guessed it was going to be all the members of the chat group but now I can see that isn't really the case, I'm not convinced with Rias and Miza, don't know if you made it so that Rias will end up with Issei, I'm not really against it. As for Miza, leaving a whole year with him yet not showing any feelings and also Yuechan didn't mention her with Nezuko on that 'show who's boss' comment. I'm OK with him not getting them all for many reasons First: The development with Chu Yuechan I would not call it perfect but I liked it quite a bit, they make a really nice couple. Second: I don't mind the other girls being in relationships with other guys as long as their intimacy and relationship progress isn't shown, if they're not in the harem, that's just not our business. Three: I like small meaningful harems. But you really make it hard by putting both DxD and ATG in the same fanfic. Seven Fairies, Mu Bingyun, Mu Xuanyin, Chi Wuyao, The Witches, LDE, Su Ling'er, Feng Xue'er, Qianye Ying'er, Shen Xi. Kuroka, Grayfia (don't think I didn't notice the colons you put in the 'Husband'), Akeno, Yasaka, Ophis, Tiamat, Suzaku, Lavinia, Rossweisse, Ravel, Koneko... You make it hard to choose. Overall sir, a great novel, the only thing you need to improve in my opinion is grammar.
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