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Neerai
NeeraiLv44yr
2020-12-17 02:06

I don't usually do review but well how your character turned out to be was the last straw and somehow made me one to make one, First the MC end up in the ship of the straw hats and proceed to tell that he's from another world and even goes as far to tell them that he know their future and tell Luffy he won't spoil only to spoil moments later, the straw hat crew isn't properly portrayed but that's a detail for example he talk back to Nami and even insult her only for her to not act like Nami (Just so that you know Nami is actually a Money Grubber she isn't a Gold Digger not same things as for the reason we all are supposed to know it she the value of money, and she hates perverts) I'll skip some other things that annoyed me, after that he fish out Vivi from the sea who end up inflated with him because of his power and then there is Mikita and the command he gives her to make her 'loyal' I started seeing how the MC was and I was right it went sh*t then the things that happen are absolute nonsense, Robin never would have trusted him enough to let him use his power on her first of all even more so when she know that he knows more than he let on and then there is him doing the exact opposite of he said he would do and betray her trust the next second and IT CERTAINLY WAS NOT FOR 'INSURANCE' since trust is to be earned and there is no shortcut to it but welp Overall, Character is trash, Story is trash

Summoner of Strawhats

Natsujan
4.4
51 Chs

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Natsujan
NatsujanAuthor

Sorry to hear that you dislike it, but I get you don't like the mc. See you on another fic.

4yr
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lok_98
lok_98Lv4

thanks for the warning bro👍

4yr
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PervertedPasserby
PervertedPasserbyLv10

thanks for the warning dude, I almost started reading 👍🏿

4yr
7
Zababuu
ZababuuLv12

Thanks, the other review made me about to start reading but this stopped me. telling someone your from another world is like telling someone you like ultimate ultimate fruit. there both Garbage. the story is a good idea, just not executed from what i can tell. but no offense to author

4yr
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Byluffy02
Byluffy02Lv12

brother your story is the best story ever. trust me I've read all the stories so far

Natsujan:Sorry to hear that you dislike it, but I get you don't like the mc. See you on another fic.
4yr
1
Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3

Thank you for taking the bullet for us. Ur sacrifice will be remembered. [img=recommend]

4yr
2
Shujinko_Josei
Shujinko_JoseiLv12

your idea on putting summoner in one piece is good but you ruined the story by mixed him with straw hat pirate. stealing luffy line and dialogue. i stop reading around chapter 12 because i feel sad seen luffy being used like that. you are bad author for ruined luffy character.

Natsujan:Sorry to hear that you dislike it, but I get you don't like the mc. See you on another fic.
4yr
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The Mc tell that he is from anothwr world but, THIS IS GOOD. Like genuinely good, It's like when I first watch one piece where there are chaos and comedy in the crew, And he's power is quite good -SO YEAH I RECOMMEND THIS FANFIC

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Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv4

I'd give it more stars if the MC wasn't an exhibitionist with his women, that shit is uncomfortable. (The king saw his daughter having *** ...) Also he should not be in the crew, I do not see that something can affect them with him in it. I think the story would have been better without him in the crew. The good points are that he is not afraid to change the canon and is determined.

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eclairsshi
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I thought this would be like Cross, i was surely mistaken. There's too many out of character moments, especially the women. It seems like author just forced their personality to add to the 'harem'

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The story is a lot of fun. There is a bunch of humour and I love the fact that he is summoning League of Legends characters. This is my favourite thing. The MC does seem a bit too trusting... but lets be real... this is a fan fiction... it has to go a bit quick and thus this is an easy way to make relationships progress. Though... Lynx turned into more of a captain that Luffy xD. Maybe my only complaint would be how easily he deals with death and killing. You should have bullshitted something along the lines of "dying makes you a bit impervous to killing" and plus the ppl he has ended are mostly scum. good luck with your story! I will keep on reading... as long as we get more LoL characters xD. Idk who would be interesting though 🤔🤔 there is a large rooster of possible choises after all. I say get an another girl. Maybe even summon "skins" since they also have different backgrounds and timelines. :D

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