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Mel_Aniv
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2021-02-25 09:56

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed!

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Hello there author! I am from review swap, please also check out my novel "Nightmare Survival" and if you have something to spare, please vote my work until the contest ends in 2 weeks. It was my last contest that I will join. 😔 🙏

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TaintedMetal
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The Pros: - Josh is a well rounded protagonist. Unlike some other protagonists in books, he is not some "anime fan/otaku, gamer, NEET, person who had a tragic life, or is so called average." Even if Josh was an average person, the author did a good job at showing rather than telling. - At the moment, the main setting does invoke curiosity, we can see how things are and the people (or creatures) that live there via Josh's interactions - So far Josh is doing what he can to survive in this whole new world. I like that he's not some chosen one or somebody who immediately needs to be a hero. The Cons (what I think needs improvement) - At first the story is in third person but then shifts to first person, and it's still the same character: Josh. It's clear that Josh is the protagonist but I think one type of POV style is enough. - There's not much to say about the world itself, what makes it unique than other fantasy worlds in other novels, but I believe we will see that in future chapters. Also, as much as there's the phrase Medieval Europe to describe castles/buildings, there's bound to be other novels going through that medieval style. If there was even more description it be more detailed than general information. - How Josh dies and gets transferred to the new world. I'm grateful that it's not another truck or whatever, but I think it's best to show us a little but more about Josh, who he was before he died, and if he died overworking, it might make sense if his immunity system was weak, or if he was a workaholic. - It's nice that Josh has awareness that he is dead and is in a new world, but I doubt he is that ignorant of his previous life on Earth. Hopefully there's moments of him reflecting that in future chapters. It's a okay novel overall. Readers should at least give this a shot.

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