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I am giving my full review!!! I have currently read all 15 chapters the author has put on there. I can't even begin to describe the level of emotions I was facing reading Frances and Father Trsitians backgrounds. It was interesting is an understatement here. I was so ficus and some engaged with the story. I definitely recommend it, it's about a question of faith. The reality we all face. I highly recommend this book to others , it is well worth it. I did find some grammar errors as well. As far as characters go, I thought that Frances and Father Tristian were very well written. I wished you would have mentioned Thomas, Matthews and her brother Quentin early on. I know you mentioned she had a boyfriend but I didn't know who that was until Matthew .I also wished to have seen his side or get to meet him at all .There wasn't much action there. I wished I could have met some of Frances family members besides the brother and more details on that. Thomas, I didn't even know who he was at first either. I would have loved for a more introduction to these characters. I absolutely adored Frances and Tristians relationship, and I hope they end up together!!!! I was rooting for them from page 1, even though France's is technically in a relationship. Good luck author!!! I thought it was amazing to read and learn these characters!!!

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Wow, thanks for getting back to this ! It is true I actually intended this story to be a short one in the first place, hence didn't quite truly introduce secondary characters much. But now it's getting bigger, I might take your advice and write a little more about all those people. Put more background. Thank you, again, for your king words. Wow !