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2021-09-20 19:10

Good story and development, bad writing with several mistakes and repetitive words every chapter(you'll read the word hate so many times that it'll lose it's meaning halfway trough), MC's cluelessness about everything makes sense on her background. That end was, disappointing, to say the least. It was understandable on the family part but disastrous on the romance part. I didn't thought there would be a second book by the way it ended, but there it's. Unfortunately it's on another platform, so it's another turndown. High chances of not reading it again anyway, that end really killed it for me.

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