Review Detail of Proteety_Promi in The Dark Past

Item: The Dark Past
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

Proteety_PromiLv32yrProteety_Promi

The story has potential, but there are a few things that should be noted by the author. Firstly, punctuation. You barely use any punctuation in dialogues! It makes the story less attractive and interesting though it can be fixed. Secondly, the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Just maybe add a few more things to make it a bit clearer. Feel free to disagree!

The Dark Past

Joecurie

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JoecurieLv1Joecurie

Wow Thank you so much @Proteety_Promi I will put it all into work. Thank you for your review ❤️

2yr

JoecurieLv1Joecurie

And starting from what chapter, did you notice no punctuations? I will be waiting for your response.

2yr

Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

Okay in the first chapter, I noticed that the usage of the brackets is unnecessary in some cases when you can just make another paragraph saying it. I think it would make it look more perfect. It's just my opinion. Feel free to disagree.

Joecurie:And starting from what chapter, did you notice no punctuations? I will be waiting for your response.

2yr

JoecurieLv1Joecurie

No,I appreciate your time reviewing my book❤️❤️ Okay,any where else?

2yr

Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

I'm still reding it. I'll let you know after that

Joecurie:No,I appreciate your time reviewing my book❤️❤️ Okay,any where else?

2yr