Item: Roses Are Red, War Is Black
Rating: 5
Author: Xephotor

XephotorLv124yr

2020-12-12 15:54

The story is characterized by its use of the second person point of view. It is my first time seeing it used for a novel of this type. Time will judge the author’s use of the second person to fulfill the psychological aspects of their story. The story has a compelling hook and does a good job introducing the reader into the world. I like the word selection the author uses to replace words or to describe something in an interesting way. The grammar is near flawless and the sentences flow well into each other. I look forward to how the author develops this story. I will certainly be keeping tabs on this novel.

Roses Are Red, War Is Black

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