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2022-10-22 07:22

Author, please get a new cover! I started reading this book when you were at chapter 30ish and its been the same cover for a year now. I think that this book is popular enough for you to commission a cover for yourself-and if you decide to, get a good one! A good cover helps new readers read your book.

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LazySageDao
LazySageDaoAuthor

I just told my discord I was planning to do so.

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Anonymous_Seeker
Anonymous_SeekerLv13

One of the best novels with Op mc and background just to my liking. Just hope the story won’t develop like those cliche novels. MC right now is not bad, I mean he ain’t like those arrogant fools who go around offending everyone though this mc’s background is op tis not invicible after all and his backing can’t fight against the world alone, he is rational not like those trash who lose themselves out of a little provacation, not like those prideful or face valued fools that don’t know how to take a step back leading to a disaster, at least now he ain’t like those pathectic and rightheous or evil mcs who would go around causing unecessary troubles and being chased like someone who deflowered the heavenly emperor’s favorite daughter which shoulda never happened b/c things aint got nothing to do with them , not lustful like those harem seeking idiots etc. Hey, i just hope that after The Dao heart trails he get sublimated in hist mental state and mood, become calm like ancient well and restrained. In the cultivation world benefit is paramount, i don’t even know why 99.9% of transmigrators always neglect this fact. It is not like they don’t know, they read countless novels and knows almost everything they should be the calmest and low key people out of all in the cultivation world. Although sometimes things are not controllable, many troubles can still be avoided, most of them be face slapping, short tempered, proud, domineering to the point of stupidity, after money, woman and immediate power saying “ I wanna pretend like my fellow transmigrators” This is absurd, why should you be like them just because you have the same origins and do brainless things without getting any benefits, later they get angered full of resentment by being betrayed by their so called woman or the one they trusted the most at critical moments when they already know ‘trust’ don’t exist in cultivation world ofc their good parents is an exception but cannot even be absolute trust in them; the human heart is unpredictable as long the benefit is worth the loss even the so called bottom line can be broken, the holy saint can become the devil. Only few of the MCs put their knowledge from earth to use and Use the heaven and earth as the chess board, sentients beings as chess pieces and making use of those fools who can’t control the greed in their hearts, calculating the heavens and playing a game of chess with heavenly dao and the opponents. In short MC can’t get too emotional and let emotions affect his mood and decions otherwise he should go be a mortal and live some life under the threat of death at anytime since mortals are ants.Anyways, this novel starting is good, just hope that it won’t develop in a disappointIng direction. More chapters need.

WiseWizard
WiseWizardLv15

It’s hard to put into words how much I enjoy this story. wang wei as a main character is phenomenal him understanding himself while acknowledging his faults as a person to grow is done so well. he’s op yet not to the point where there is no one to challenge him from getting stomped by di tian or the fella born from two great emperors in the most recent chapters whos as of now more powerful than him while being in the same generation gives his strength more depth along with the fact that he has to go through hundreds to thousands of years of cultivation despite his overwhelming talent compared to some mcs who in their own verse are 20 year olds fighting old monsters millions of years old like no big deal. His confidence in himself is somthing I also enjoy. The world building is the thing I enjoy the most by far. The way you crafted the universe to allow uncountable numbers of power systems each to their own heavenwill world is marvelous. The lore of the myriad emperor world is also somthing I love. When they talk about the past eras and the truth of how they played out its makes me want to know more. The way you’ve combined basically every eastern fantasy cultivation system into this story without it seeming forced but the natural order of things is great. If there’s anything lacking about them is that there seems to be a lack of soul cultivators considering it’s one of the three principles that make up cultivation systems it seems strange we haven’t encountered any or a sect that focuses on the souls and ways to attack and utilize it to a extreme. The romance and side characters are a strong suit. everyone in this great generation competing to become the next eternal emperor they all have their own motives and goals there own dreams and families counting on them to live up to their expectations. It’s funny seeing how you characterize someone like Lin Fan being a classic cultivation main character coming from a lower world with great talent and a harem. wang weis relationship with wu Hong is also something I enjoy her mystery and his insecurities in the relationship while still loving her and having to deal with them. Li Jun is also the goat fr. Now after praising the story to the high heavens to mention the only glaring fault I have with the story. The grammar, while by no means bad or unreadable there are moments where it has broke me out of my immersion because I have to check if I read somthing wrong only to find the wrong word. This isn’t something common and has only happened to me a couple times in the story and in the last 50 chapters hasn’t happened at all or at least that I’ve noticed. Overall 10/10 cant wait for the next chapters.

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