Review Detail of Seishi_ in Walking in my sister's shoes

So far it is good. Kinda like the idea of having good brother-sister relationship. Although it is decent, there are errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks and lack of capitalization usage. Also, you need to update as it has been 2 months since you posted the 7th chapter. It is okay to have some errors. You'll grow. Good luck and keep it up.