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Review Detail of Tupan in Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

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Tupan
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Great story so far. The writing quality is top notch. I like the main character and his romantic relationship but i would appreciate more focus on their relationship as well as less time skips.

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Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Yasashiki

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Yasashiki
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Thanks, I appreciate it! I don’t consider my writing skills to be top-notch honestly, when I compare it to some writers who are capable of giving the right amount of details and easily make the readers imagine what they are talking about, without writing too much. As for the relationship, I will add some interactions from time to time because I agree I did skip quite a lot from chapters 27 to 29 because I was eager to write them. Also, because of my slow release rate, I felt that doing a couple of slice-of-life chapters would make it boring and harder for the readers to wait.