Review Detail of Rando_ in Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Item: Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)
Rating: 4.4

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This is a really interesting fic, it’s not in anyway new and different, but there are a lot of things that this author does well, he makes the characters have depth to them, maybe not quite alive, but very good as characters. People who have read the original novels will understand more that those that have not(me) but thats fine. All in all, a really good fic

Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Yasashiki

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Thank you for the review! Indeed I find it hard to give characters depth. Usually, I try to at least give them a personality so it doesn't feel boring with the dialogues but the more characters there are in the story, the harder it can be. Using the first person POV also doesn't help much, but the mind-reading can sometimes add something.

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