Review Detail of Yasashiki in Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)
Review detail
I forgot to do my review so here it is one month later, I will try to be objective. My writing quality is good enough to be easily read and usually with the least grammar error possible but I am not competent enough to embellish every paragraph. My update stability isn't one chapter per day but I said at LEAST 1 each week and for now, I didn't fail it. For now, I'm happy about the story development I made, not much more to say here or it would be spoil. I honestly think I suck in terms of character design, I have a hard time doing great descriptions of peoples. And for world background well... it is not coming from my head but from Kishimoto’s right now but when I add things I try to make them faithful. I try to explain my choices in due times to not make you confused, and I usually show images of things I talk about that aren't in the original (like weapons or other things...) Hope you will enjoy it!
Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)
Yasashiki
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Man_of_culture_69:So far i liked your harem but i always tried to find a naruto fanfics kushina and konan in harem. Ik tsunade is hot but if u'r gonna add kushina in harem then im in 😁 hope u tell me. Lol
Dragonised101:wait there's a harem, how come there's no harem tag
Markushnia:Just a note off topic. " Just a random 21 years old Frenchy " " 2019-02-23 Joined " How long has this record been updated ? Because if not, then .. doesn't that mean you're 24 ? =\
I know its late for the reply as it is already finished but i just wanted to say it was … kinda disappointing when he wished for his mother’s death ( I understand tho .. ) well i am still at the beginning and i hope he revives her or something . Because having a plank of wood as an mc is too overused and disappointing .
I know, I didn’t want my MC to be perfect so I made him flawed (mostly his emotional control being misused) and that’s the thing he will have the most remorse with, but he’s changing throughout the story and you shouldn't be disappointed by the end :). Still, good luck reading since the first third of the chapters came out two years ago (nearly three) so my grammar might be harsh.
s_b8099:I know its late for the reply as it is already finished but i just wanted to say it was … kinda disappointing when he wished for his mother’s death ( I understand tho .. ) well i am still at the beginning and i hope he revives her or something . Because having a plank of wood as an mc is too overused and disappointing .
Thanks for answering .. and i had a question after seeing that the mc has to generate the tail beast chakra by meditation to 100% but after using it all up does he need to meditate again to convert it like the first time or is it automatic after that . Oh , and i have to say that the mc same a great character development from the start to the end and i love the novel .
Yasashiki:I know, I didn’t want my MC to be perfect so I made him flawed (mostly his emotional control being misused) and that’s the thing he will have the most remorse with, but he’s changing throughout the story and you shouldn't be disappointed by the end :). Still, good luck reading since the first third of the chapters came out two years ago (nearly three) so my grammar might be harsh.
The first time is more like ‘copying’ until it reaches the right amount, afterward it will regenerate over time as if it was his own chakra. And I’m glad to hear that you like the story :).
s_b8099:Thanks for answering .. and i had a question after seeing that the mc has to generate the tail beast chakra by meditation to 100% but after using it all up does he need to meditate again to convert it like the first time or is it automatic after that . Oh , and i have to say that the mc same a great character development from the start to the end and i love the novel .
DriftingDragon:Umm please just narutoverse... Or do a less saturated animeverse after like fairy tale or something. Ive so much onepiece, marvel and dc stories/multiverse stories... Its making my head hurt...