Review Detail of choiyex_jfy in Hitman with a Badass System

It would have been perfect if Gaya and Darklord thingy did not exist, and if he just focused on being a hitman and awesome. You add drak lord and system to the mix. The story becomes too linear and predictable, plus you included cliché romance. Hitman should not have any personal relationships because it is a liability or a source of weakness. also, being an elite assassin from the world of modern science and great history, he should continue to use that as an advantage he should have a different mentality or mindset to others. he should have good tactics, theory, martial arts, and technology to unlock or invent. I quit at 410. i can no longer continue to read this as i no longer enjoy the direction of the novel.