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HunterFox
HunterFoxLv123yr
2021-08-19 11:38

*SPOILERS* At the point of making this review I have read all the way to chapter 225, I certain event in this chapter inspired me to make this review. First I want to talk about the writing, absolutely f@%#!*g great, the character development is great, the side characters are great, the world development is great. My only...problem with the writing so far is the development of the love interest, don't get me wrong I love that snake but the way the Author... ok ok let me give an example, in some latter chapters ghost says he couldn't even think about living with put that cute snake( sorry I just love Gaya = the cute snake ) but I don't feel enough attention was put on their relationship for this to be said when it was. maybe it's just me but that kinda buged me, but I also want to give the author props for not giving a harem, I personally dislike that trop. second thing I want to talk about is the history, of the world, of Michael/ ghost, of the powerful family's. The way the author revels this history is splendid, especially Michael's history. and to make sure I don't spend hours typing about this novel, because I could, I want to talk about one very important plot twist so I'm going to scream this now SPOILER WARNING IF YOU ARE NOT AT CHAPTER 200 YET DO NOT READ THIS! The fact that the one character in this novel that is supposed to me Michael's arch nemis, the light to his dark, is his F#@%&!G brother! excuse! I was so surprised by this I put my phone down. I never expected this and I wsnt to give props, once again , to the author for surprising me. sorry for my bad grammar :) - One frosty fox

Hitman with a Badass System

don_offl
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1462 Chs

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Koth_8331
Koth_8331Lv1

what do you mean about the plot twist? is it the dark lord? or he from a rich family ( Noah) ? or he go to south continent

3yr
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SeekingSolace
SeekingSolaceLv14

Really enjoying this book. Michael sticks to whay he says and i love the Ruthlessness. Really hoping this doesnt turn into a harem. Looking forward to more updates

4yr

Edgelord666
Edgelord666Lv5

this shit is dope. I mean, I haven't seen such a concept except in fanfic. I can't describe this hidden piece of Gem without spoiling it for you. just read the first 5 chapters and you will know what I am talking about.

4yr
hkka
hkkaLv11

This Deserves an oscar... The character designs and names and how the author was trying to compare real life celebrities to characters was a out of place, but don’t misunderstand im really tired of those long chinese names that is hard to spell and remember compared to names in the novel like michael,gaya,claire and more is really making it easy to swallow. Tbh except that part everything impressed me. I think if you gave it a chance by reading 5-8 chapters you wont stop until you finished 😊.

4yr
Ririririri_Chan
Ririririri_ChanLv1

All i can say is this novel is too good, too awesome, and i cant vote since im only level 1🤧 but i hope more people will read this. Thanks boss author for ur cool novel, i hope my review will get u motivated to update lmao. We reader want MORE MORE MORE HAHHAHA i want more Merry Christmas HAHHAHA and this is all i can review, my first i think.

4yr
11_Heavens
11_HeavensLv1

Good story, but the MC becomes kinda dumb after loving that gaya. MC doesn't have the resolve to do anything to achieve what he wants. The romance is author's real life fantasies that he is writing in the novel. The romance subplot kinda ruined the story. The mc doesn't have to train he can just fight anyone without any prior experience is kinda stupid.

1yr
DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv1

I read up to 78 and quit at 78. Even though the author said that he doesn't like girls who blush at everything, I read until 78 and there are girls who blush at everything and your understanding of romance is really bad (a girl with little acquaintance sees the main character while fighting and is affected. Then she kisses the main character without saying anything and has a happy ending) to say I would like the author, this is not rheumatism, this is a scene set to impress adolescents, I left it in 78. If there is such a scene, it exists in the future. Author, I hope you don't delete the comment. (I'm sorry if there are wrong words, my native language is not English)

3yr
Eueo
EueoLv10

I like the story the mc is really badass i like how ruthless he is not dense and low-key which really emphasize badass hes kills anyone who gets in he's way and it's just that I kinda feel like he's system is too op he just bought knowledge from system wow 5 - Star Alchemist like what it's just felt like rush and btw the purpose for he's transmigration the Princess which is supposed he's early goals replace by being rules of the world Overall great story tnx.

4yr
Shadowles
ShadowlesLv1

Love this book and realy love the authors profile pic. definitely a book to read. love the fact that their is no harem and the system is nice to.

4yr
Thorleif
ThorleifLv15

Very good story, I really wonder why it isn't more popular. One does notice sometimes that english isn't the authors first language, but it does not break the immersion for me. The mistakes are mostly minor. Apart from that the story and characters are really great, I can absolutely recommend this novel. I hope it will become more popular in the future.

3yr
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