Review Detail of ChadFacts in The Fat God System

The dialogue and fight scenes are VERY bad. Even after 20 chapters I don't understand his abilities. The concept of the system is great, but the implementation of it in the story is not. I can't stand the really unrealistic characters and unrealistic dialogue. The writing quality isn't all it is hyped up to be either. Sure, the writer has virtually zero grammatical errors. However, that isn't all that matters with writing quality. It is too dull, boring, static. It needs to be more colorful and deep, but this is just... it feels like someone K-12 trying to write a book for a school project.