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razorwhip08
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2021-08-06 23:17

Great so far. It's just that the language makes me feel uneasy somehow. With all the cursing haha. It does not suit the FL and the characters at all 😅

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AnnGuslavia
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I'm glad u liked it. and don't worry babe, I'm changing a lot of things that also bothered me, while I'm editing all the chapters.

letmebeyourdemise
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it does fits the character a damn lot, if I had gone through all she did, Lord, I would curse the whole damn world as well!

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