So I read the story so far, I like the concept that our MC sucks at the game and had died 999 times (to get it right like how our MC mentions). I find the writing quality to be good, nothing too obvious to nit-pick and by far the pace is cool and the world development is alright. The character design seems justified. So, I'll add this story to my library to see its progress.
Pill_Guy
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